essay check 5
I need to revise my personal statement.
this essay was not organized.
I want that you read my essay then please rewrite by your words about my life and my experience.
my intro reallly boring….but i want to link fabre and my subject ( really my best book and my inspiration)
bu my logic is very weak…i dont know how to connencting
and not create even boring. I want to change it to alive english. and up level vocab.
i know how difficult revision. so If you can do rewrite I really want it.
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